http://www.25hourwatch.com/2010/01/12/belief/ Not all that useful for telling time, no... Wed, 19 Oct 2011 19:41:16 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.2.1 http://www.25hourwatch.com/2010/01/12/belief/comment-page-1/#comment-183 iheartkarate Fri, 26 Feb 2010 17:47:31 +0000 http://www.25hourwatch.com/?p=441#comment-183 aww. Poor Rick! That sucks! Can't wait for more! aww. Poor Rick! That sucks! Can’t wait for more!

]]> http://www.25hourwatch.com/2010/01/12/belief/comment-page-1/#comment-84 BM Wed, 13 Jan 2010 23:11:09 +0000 http://www.25hourwatch.com/?p=441#comment-84 Love the style here; it puts me in the moment along with Rick. Great variety with the format and the flashback, and like Mike, I think there are some great, well-put-together sentences. Keep posting! Love the style here; it puts me in the moment along with Rick. Great variety with the format and the flashback, and like Mike, I think there are some great, well-put-together sentences. Keep posting!

]]> http://www.25hourwatch.com/2010/01/12/belief/comment-page-1/#comment-76 MS Tue, 12 Jan 2010 17:23:26 +0000 http://www.25hourwatch.com/?p=441#comment-76 Oh, I think I figured it out! Before reading this part of Rick's story I went back and read the other two parts. I then noticed something about the barista and my suspicions were confirmed when reading this part. My comment for Blue contained an assumption which I think may not be the case. Assumptions are dangerous things, no? Bravo, CW, bravo! "Belief" is my favorite part of the Rick Saga, without question. It contains pizza. Any story worth its weight must have a mention of pizza. My favorite line, "She [the waitress] took his order, dragging it with labored steps back into the kitchen to be born." I'm really getting excited about the continuation of this. Your writing style is amazing, loved the flashback to the conversation back at the coffee bar. Don't keep us hanging! Oh, I think I figured it out! Before reading this part of Rick’s story I went back and read the other two parts. I then noticed something about the barista and my suspicions were confirmed when reading this part. My comment for Blue contained an assumption which I think may not be the case. Assumptions are dangerous things, no? Bravo, CW, bravo! “Belief” is my favorite part of the Rick Saga, without question. It contains pizza. Any story worth its weight must have a mention of pizza. My favorite line, “She [the waitress] took his order, dragging it with labored steps back into the kitchen to be born.” I’m really getting excited about the continuation of this. Your writing style is amazing, loved the flashback to the conversation back at the coffee bar. Don’t keep us hanging!

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